Daily Book Excerpt: Poetry
The Norton Anthology of Modern and Contemporary Poetry, Volume 2: Contemporary Poetry, edited by Jahan Ramazani, Richard Ellmann, and Robert O’Clair
I had not heard of Lorine Niedecker, until this past January, when I took the Norton Anthology out to Block Island with me, in the hopes that it would help me get back to reading again. Something big and varied, that wouldn’t require a ton of concentration. Flip through it from time to time, read the poems, read the intros … It did help me get back to reading. And it was fun to re-read things like “The Waste Land” and some of Pound’s Cantos, things I know well – but haven’t read in their entirety in a long time. And somehow, I came across Lorine Niedecker, who is anthologized. There is a brief introductory note for her – not a long one, since she lived in the same place her entire life – not many “events” to speak of – but her poems are incredible.
I am so glad I encountered her. She was born in 1903 in Wisconsin and spent her whole life on Black Hawk Island. She lived with her parents, and took care of them when they became elderly. She went to college briefly. She had many jobs, some menial, some not. Somewhere along in here, she started writing poetry. In 1931, she read Louis Zukofsky’s “Objectivist” issue of Poetry magazine, and traveled to New York to meet him. They ended up carrying on a long correspondence. The “Objectivists” wanted to create poems that were not sentimental, or ornamental – simple, clean, clear. Lorine Niedecker is a classic example of an Objectivist poet. Her poems have no “needless words”, they almost feel like haikus: miniature little sketches – and the way she used indentation and spaces makes them unmistakably hers.
She was obviously a well-read curious intellectual woman, and her poems are not about the flowers, and the leaves, and her emotions. She wrote poems about Darwin, the Chinese poet Li Po, the North American explorers – and in this way, she is an heir of Ezra Pound, whose poems have a collage effect, full of references to existing material.
While I was out on Block Island, I read all of her work anthologized – the first one being her long poem on Thomas Jefferson (bestill my heart) – and now I’m a fan forever. She’s also not for dummies. She expects people to be familiar with the events of his life (or Darwin’s life, or whoever), and the references come fast and furious. She doesn’t slow down for morons. There are footnotes in the Norton Anthology, and with Niedecker, at times, you really need them. But don’t let them slow you down. Keep going. Niedecker waits for no one.
Niedecker uses quotes and fragments from the letters of Thomas Jefferson in order to create the poem (if you’ve read his letters, you’ll recognize a lot of this).
I think it’s an extraordinary poem.
Thomas Jefferson
I
My wife is ill!
And I sit
waiting
for a quorum
II
Fast ride
his horse collapsed
Now he saddled walked
Borrowed a farmer’s
unbroken colt
To Richmond
Richmond How stop
Arnold’s redcoats
there
III
Elk Hill destroyedâ
Cornwallis
carried off 30 slaves
Jefferson:
Were it to give them freedom
heâd have done right
IV
Latin and Greek
my tools
to understand
humanity
I rode horse
away from a monarch
to an enchanting
philosophy
V
The South of France
Roman temple
simple and sublime
Maria Cosway
harpist
on his mind
white column
and arch
VI
To daughter Patsy: Readâ
read Livy
No person full of work
was ever hysterical
Know music, history
dancing
(I calculate 14 to 1
in marriage
she will draw
a blockhead)
Science also
Patsy
VII
Agreed with Adams:
send spermaceti oil to Portugal
for their church candles
(light enough to banish mysteries?:
three are one and one is three
and yet the one not three
and the three not one)
and send slat fish
U.S. salt fish preferred
above all other
VIII
Jefferson of Patrick Henry
backwoods fiddler statesman:
âHe spoke as Homer wroteâ
Henry eyed our minister at Parisâ
the Bill of Rights hassleâ
he remembers . . .
in splendor and dissipation
he thinks yet of bills of rightsâ
IX
True, French frills and lace
for Jefferson, sword and belt
but follow the Court to Fontainebleau
he could not
house rent would have left him
nothing to eat
. . .
He bowed to everyone he met
and talked with arms folded
He could be trimmed
by a two-month migraine
and yet
stand up
X
Dear Polly:
I said No no frost
in Virginiaâthe strawberries
were safe
I’d have heard I’m in that kind
of correspondence
with a young daughter
if they were not
Now I must retract
I shrink from it
XI
Political honors
âsplendid tormentsâ
âIf one could establish
an absolute power
of silence over oneselfâ
When I set out for Monticello
(my grandchildren
will they know me?)
How are my young
chestnut treesâ
XII
Hamilton and the bankers
would make my country Carthage
I am abandoning the richâ
their dinner partiesâ
I shall eat my simlins
with the class of science
or not at all
Next year the last of labors
among conflicting parties
Then my family
we shall sow our cabbages
together
XIII
Delicious flower
of the acacia
or rather
Mimosa Nilotica
from Mr. Lomax
XIV
Polly Jefferson, 8, had crossed
to father and sister in Paris
by way of LondonâAbigail
embraced herâAdams said
âin all my life I never saw
more charming childâ
Death of Polly, 25,
Monticello
XV
My harpsichord
my alabaster vase
and bridle bit
bound for Alexandria
Virginia
The good sea weather
of retirement
The drift and suck
and die-down of life
but there is land
XVI
These were my passions:
Monticello and the villa-temples
I passed on to carpenters
bricklayers what I knew
and to an Italian sculptor
how to turn a volute
on a pillar
You may approach the campus rotunda
from lower to upper terrace
Cicero had levels
XVII
John Adamsâ eyes
dimming
Tom Jeffersonâs rheumatism
cantering
XVIII
Ah soon must Monticello be lost
to debts
and Jefferson himself
to death
XIX
Mind leaving, let body leave
Let dome live, spherical dome
and colonnade
Martha (Patsy) stay
The Committee of Safety
must be warned
Stay youthâAnne and Ellen
all my books, the bantams
and the seeds of the senega root
My god.
There’s so much in that I don’t know where to begin.
(I laughed out loud at that opening line; I’m rather surprised it wasn’t stolen for 1776!)
Humor, history, poignancy…
lovely.
Isn’t it amazing? I love the part about the spermaceti oil – which starts out practical, basically an instruction, and then goes off into “there are one and one is three” – a contemplation of the mysteries – it seems to capture who he was so perfectly.
It’s wonderfully like life, with all its moods revealed.
(I calculate 14 to 1
in marriage
she will draw
a blockhead)
Laughing about that one – and then she goes right to the stanza you quote, Sheila. Brilliant work. Thanks for introducing her to us.
AND congrats on breaking your reader’s block!
I know – I love the blockhead line! Actual quote!!
The bit about the migraines really touched me. I know he suffered from them tremendously.
Her other stuff (Niedecker’s) is well worth checking out – a lot of is online, so go check it out!
I also love LOVE LOVE “Cicero had levels”
So witty, so true.
I love how after the thought of wondering about his grandchildren he asks “How are my young chestnut trees — ”
Need to read American Sphinx again…
“You may approach the campus rotunda
from lower to upper terrace
Cicero had levels ”
Countless times I did that.
Every stanza is just packed full.
I’m so psyched you all like this! I was so excited by my discovery of Lorine Niedecker.
How about this line:
Now I must retract
I shrink from it
Wow. I have a couple theories about it. Would be interested to hear your thoughts, you who understand the context.
Seen in the light of what has come before – his kind of irritable letter to his daughter (and his letters to his children are insufferable – he can’t stop giving advice – I know it was the style of the day – Abigail’s letters to John Quincy want to make you shake her and say, “LAY OFF, for ONE SECOND”) – and then … a retraction. From intimacy? From involvement? He wanted to be cool and impenetrable – like a Greek column – but of course he was hot-headed and FULL of intensity.
I love that line – it is full of mystery – Niedecker really seems to have understood him on a profound level.
But I would love to hear other interpretations if you’ve got ’em.
I find this verse just profoundly sad:
XIV
Polly Jefferson, 8, had crossed
to father and sister in Paris
by way of LondonâAbigail
embraced herâAdams said
âin all my life I never saw
more charming childâ
Death of Polly, 25,
Monticello
I’m looking at the “shrink from it” verse, and I must confess I don’t know the letter that she is talking about.
I can theorize about what it refers to
“Dear Polly:
I said Noâno frost
in Virginiaâthe strawberries
were safe
Iâd have heardâIâm in that kind
of correspondence
with a young daughterâ
if they were not
Now I must retract
I shrink from it”
All I can say is that as a father of a daughter now 16 there comes a time when you realize that as much as you wish to remain an Olympian and rule by decree you must…back off from stating things that you know to be facts in your world as facts, because they may not be so in your daughter’s world. And even if they are, well, she needs to discover that for herself.
And it is a shrinking, in a sense, of your role as GOD to that of…father. Friend. It is not an easy transition, for any of the parties involved.