Daily Book Excerpt: Adult fiction:
This excerpt is from “The Next Room”, another short story from the collection Sugar and Other Stories
And I know people like Molly – people who are perpetually disappointed by life … making me wonder: What exactly did you want?
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Excerpt from “The Next Room”, another short story from the collection Sugar and Other Stories
She became aware of two quite different aspects of her sense of her mother who was not here. The first was an expectation of her imminent arrival, querulous or ready with a piece of witty self-deprecation, to take up her seat in her chair and ask for this and that to be fetched or taken away. This almost comfortable epectation was uncanny only because Molly would never come again; it was usual, and would not be switched off to order, or for reason’s sake. The second was not expectation, but reminiscence and later came to constitute itself in Joanna’s thought as “the jigsaw”. She had had such a jigsaw during the long and tedious years at boarding school – a set of images, strip-cartoon pictures, patches of colour, she seemed to snip out with mental scissors and fit together awkwardly and with overlaps or gaps, labelling this for reference “my mother”, an entity which had little or nothing to do with the living, slippered creature who would not again patter between Cliff Thorburn and the toaster, or take up the knitting-needles and count stitches. “My mother” in Joanna’s schooldays had, like most people’s mothers, worn embarrassing and strident hats. She was frozen forever in Joanna’s playroom doorway like an avenging angel crying out against powder paint on the carpet fifty-four years ago. A comforting corner of the jigsaw held a kitchen mother with a wooden spoon, dripping cochineal into birthday icing: she was good at cakes, and enjoyed Joanna’s pleasure. Joanna turned the finished jigsaw in her mind like a kaleidosocope; there were things now, that constituted sharp corners and jagged edges, that she had never brought out to look at in those long flickering evenings in case Molly overlooked or overheard her thoughts. Many of these pieces were to do with her vanished father, who had begun to vanish long before he had in fact chosed gently to death, who had begun to vanish at precisely the moment when he had become perpetually present, which his premature retirement, or whatever it had been, had confined him to Molly’s territory and its margins, the far reaches of the garden, the bonfire, the compost heap, the battle with ground elder from next door. Molly had been a great requirer: she had expected much from life, and had not had it, and had made her disappointment vociferous. Joanna was not, and now never would be, quite sure what she had wanted – it was not particularly to do anything, but to be something, the wife of an influential and successful man. (Joanna’s own life, a career devoted to useful work for underdeveloped socieites, had been conceived in direct opposition to this want.) Joanna sometimes suspected that her mother had married her father simply because he represented the nearest thing she knew to this vicarious influence and success. He had been clever, shy, and formal, a step up the social scale for the daughter of a sub-postmistress. He might have become an Under-Secretary or even better. He never talked about his work, and then, suddenly, there was trouble – “the silly mess your father got into” – Joanna would never know what – and it was at an end.
He had become ill, almost immediately, within a year at most. A wasting disease had attacked him. Joanna had heard him say once, in the conservatory, “I wasted time, and now doth time waste me,” but he had been saying it into the trumpets of his lilies, not to her. He said nothing to Molly, who said a great deal to him, and Joanna had always bitterly felt that he saw Joanna herself as an extension of his wife. He had had fine, cobwebby grey hair, that when he worked he sleeked, briefly, with water. As he wasted away he became all grey; his face grew thinner, and ashen, and developed long fine downwards pleats and incisions, and then a crazy criss-cross of cracks as he diminished steadily. His eyes had always been a pale, smoky grey. He wandered among the smoke of his bonfires in a grey V-necked pullover, carrying increasingly small forkfuls of twigs and dried weeds, ghost-grey. Joanna had been very startled that the ashes which she sifted onto the roots of Madame Alfred Carriere, at the last, had been creamy white.
The stages of his slow decline were marked on the whole by jigsaw pieces depicting, not him, but Molly’s dealings with him. Molly declaring, after the fateful interview with the specialist, “There’s nothing really wrong with him: he just needs to pull himself together, you’ll see.” Molly’s distaste for his bodily presence and all his activities. He had tried, in the early days, to have a glass of beer in the early evenings. Molly had taken exception to this. The smell, she said, disgusted her. Beer was a sickening smell. (The fact that Joanna also disliked its smell had rendered her icily neutral in this dispute.) Molly had pounced on his beer glass the moment it was emptied, when the air still lingered in the fringe of froth at its brim, and had washed and washed it, her mouth set. Later, she had commented to Joanna on every small eructation. Your father’s tummy grumbles all the time. He makes awful belching noises. It’s the beer. It’s disgusting. Towards the end, when the discreet belches were an inevitable function of his failing body, she had not even waited for his absence to comment. He appeared not to hear. He gave up the beer.
